1. You have decided to invest your hard earned money and some money you have borrowed from your friends to open a clothing store. 1. What kind of clothes are you going to sell? 

2. When people think of your store, what three words do you want them to think of? 

3. What kind of people are you going to hire to work in your store?  

In my store i would sell all types of clothes, for example pants, T-shirts, hats, shoes, etc... 

The three words I want people to think of when my store comes to mind is cheap, good quality, and always in fashion.

I would want to hire people with experience in the fashion industry, a sense of humor, and great enthusiasm so my costumers will feel welcome.

In Timothy A. Hacsi's article, "Stop Waiting for a Savior," from the New York Times he argues that people should stop waiting for a savior that will hopefully change everything and turn schools around instead of actually doing something about it and trying to make the schools better. I believe that the best way to change a schools test scores is by giving them the correct resources they need.

In Bilger's essay "The Last Meow," he states that American spending on their pets has gotten out of control. I agree...

We learned how to use this template and three things that must go in the template,  identify the author, the text, and the opinion.

Today we learned how to properly use the templates and how to properly use the phrase "on the other hand." When using the phrase "on one hand," you have to follow it with "on the other hand." For example, on one hand, some Americans believe that they should treat their pets as family. On the other hand, some believe that they are just pets and should be treated as so.

To successfully make a college essay there are certain templates that you can use to start off in an essay and certain ways of addressing the topic. When writing the essay you have to find out your position in the argument and then decide which template to use for example of you agree with the writer but not completly  you can use this template, Although i agree with the writers opinion________ i cannot agree that _______ this template can come in handy when writing and argumental essay,

Comparing our essays with the one we went over, I think that ours wasn't as good as we thought. We missed a lot important points that we didn't go over in our essay. I didn't go over the importance of restating Bilger's essay and stating the opposing argument. But its always good that we learn from our mistakes so we can become better writers.

3/10/2011 Luis and juvenal's

When writing an essay you have to make sure that you don't write any awkward or incorrect sentences or paragraphs. So you do not cause the reader to get confused or lose his train of thought. A very important lesson we all should remember is the burden for clear writing rests on the writer.